Tuesday, January 13, 2009

Max the Smart meets the Gooey Monster

It was a nice and sunny day. Max and his friends were outside playing. All of the sudden a BIG green gooey Monster appeared. AHHHHHHH! screamed Max’s friends. But Max knew something was not right. So he hopped into his super suit and flew off to save the world.


[PA R T T W O] Max got into the Max mobile and the Max mobile went: WOOOOOOSH! He found a zipper on the back of the monster. Quickly he went in. Inside the Monsters BIG body Max saw a little hole. He zoomed in.


[P A R T T H R E E] Max used his drop rope to drop down. He pulled his sword out. He looked around himself to see if there was any danger. It seemed that he was on a floor. And no danger. This is mysterious, Max thought.


[P A R T F O U R] Max walked:102400000000 miles. Finally, Max saw a person controlling the Monster. Halt! Said Max. What are you doing? Asked Max. The person turned around. How dare you enter my Monster. He said. Well Mr. Meany. Said max. I think you're surrounded.


[P A R T F I V E] Well. Said the bad guy. I have a surprise for you. He pulled his sword out. Oh to bad because I brought mine to. Then Max pulled his sword out too. They fought. 4 hours later the bad guy accidentally pushed the stop button and fell out. OUCH! Said the bad guy when he hit the ground. Max called the police.6 minutes later they came. But something was very strange. It was snowing! On a sunny day! HOORAY!


THE END